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 # General References {#general-data-hacking-and-programming-references}
-
-## Who can be a hack day participant
-There are many roles you can play as a hack day participant; coder, designer UX/graphics.
 
 ## The basics of being a data scientist
 
@@ -68,13 +65,12 @@
 
 [![](img/Screenshot-at-2012-04-29-172132-300x235.png "Git Screenshot")](http://progit.org/book/)
 
-[http://progit.org/book/](http://progit.org/book/)
-
-[http://svnbook.red-bean.com/](http://svnbook.red-bean.com/)
-
-[http://tortoisesvn.net/](http://tortoisesvn.net/)
-
-[http://code.google.com/p/tortoisegit/](http://code.google.com/p/tortoisegit/)
+[tutorials on git](http://progit.org/book/) and
+[GUIs to help you](http://code.google.com/p/tortoisegit/)
+
+[manual for Subversion](http://svnbook.red-bean.com/)
+and a [similar GUI for Subversion](http://tortoisesvn.net/)
+
 
 ### Task Tracking
 
@@ -127,9 +123,9 @@
 
 API documentation is important too! Traditionally for SOAP APIs, you use WSDL but for REST try [Swagger](http://swagger.wordnik.com/) or [iodocs](https://github.com/mashery/iodocs)
 Many web app frameworks can generate the documentation for you. For example Symfony for PHP http://symfony.com/ https://github.com/FriendsOfSymfony/FOSRestBundle http://williamdurand.fr/2012/08/02/rest-apis-with-symfony2-the-right-way/ https://github.com/nelmio/NelmioApiDocBundle
-Or for Ruby on Rails there is is https://github.com/elc/rapi_doc https://github.com/Pajk/apipie-rails
 
  better apis https://github.com/liip/LiipHelloBundle
+      - or for Rails https://github.com/elc/rapi_doc https://github.com/Pajk/apipie-rails
 
    http://amberonrails.com/building-stripes-api/
 
@@ -153,11 +149,11 @@
 
     - https://graphics.stanford.edu/wikis/cs448b-12-fall/ data viz theory
     - http://drawingbynumbers.org/toolsandresources
-     - http://selection.datavisualization.ch/ data viz tools catalog
 
 examples    - http://sunfoundation.tumblr.com/
 ### The Open Budget
 
+tools     - http://selection.datavisualization.ch/ data viz tools catalog
 
 ## Web Applications
 
@@ -217,28 +213,26 @@
 Backend frameworks http://helios.io/ https://www.parse.com/
 ### Examples
 
-Bureau of Meteorology Water Storage App http://icelab.com.au/work/bureau-of-meteorology/
-
-NZ Gov budget http://www.treasury.govt.nz/budget/app
+bom water,
+
+nz gov budget
 
 
 # Geographical Data Tools {#geographical-data-tools}
 
-Check out the [GeoRabble Boundary Mapper's Cookbook](http://georabble.org/2012/05/31/the-boundary-mappers-cookbook/) to see how you can tie all these things together!
+Check out the[ GeoRabble Boundary Mapper's Cookbook](http://georabble.org/2012/05/31/the-boundary-mappers-cookbook/) to see how you can tie all these things together!
 
 ## Key datasets
-base layers like agri http://agri.openstreetmap.org/, http://irs.gis-lab.info/ wms or http://www.gdal.org/frmt_wms_openstreetmap_tms.xml
-
-ASGS from ABS including suburbs/postcodes andrewharvey4.wordpress.com postgis/asgs tutorial
-You can also get KML layers for various statistical measures on the ABS TableBuilder tool.
-
+          - base layers like agri http://agri.openstreetmap.org/, http://irs.gis-lab.info/ wms or http://www.gdal.org/frmt_wms_openstreetmap_tms.xml
+           ASGS including suburbs/postcodes
+                   - andrewharvey4.wordpress.com postgis/asgs tutorial
 ## Wrangling
 
 ### Converting
 There are many spatial data formats and often the one your tool requires is not the one the dataset is provided in
 Online
   - http://converter.mygeodata.eu/vector kml exporter for shp
-or locally using GDAL (better for many megabyte datasets)
+or locally using GDAL
 
 ### Geocoding
 cloudmade, google (but you must display on a Google Map).
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       - http://chartsnthings.tumblr.com/post/36978271916/r-tutorial-simple-charts http://flowingdata.com/2012/12/17/getting-started-with-charts-in-r/
       
       http://www.r-bloggers.com/to-plot-them-is-my-real-test/
-
+                               http://blog.revolutionanalytics.com/2013/04/visualize-large-data-sets-with-the-bigvis-package.html 10 Million Points in 5 seconds.
 
 ## Visualisation
 
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 Create visualisations from various data formats by dragging and dropping. Free trial available on website. [![](img/Tableau-Screenshot-300x190.jpg "Tableau Screenshot")](img/Tableau-Screenshot.jpg)
 
-### [Flotr2](http://www.humblesoftware.com/flotr2/)/[Google Chart Tools](https://developers.google.com/chart/)
-
+### Web page (Javascript) graphs
+[Flotr2](http://www.humblesoftware.com/flotr2/)/[Google Chart Tools](https://developers.google.com/chart/)
 [![](img/How-to-participate-in-GovHack_html_m11006fce-300x199.jpg "flotr2 screenshot")](img/How-to-participate-in-GovHack_html_m11006fce.jpg)Javascript based charts for webpages.
+http://www.polychartjs.com/ Allows facetting and easy use of JSON data sets.
 
 ### D3.js (Data-Driven Documents)
 
@@ -352,7 +347,7 @@
 ### Processing.js
 
 # Unstructured (Text) Data Tools
-Most of the world's data isn't structured because it is contained in documents (webpages, tweets etc.). Sometimes it is possible to structure it, sometimes there are tools that are better suited it unstructured data.
+Most of thw world's dat isn't structured because it is contained in documents (webpages, tweets etc.). Sometimes it is possible to structure it, sometimes there are tools that are better suited it unstructured data.
 ## Wrangling
 For extracting data from webpages, checkout Scraperwiki pytemplate scrapy
 
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 If there is no way to form a table structure to be able to apply tabular data techniques , you need a more sophisticated analysis as detailed below.
 
 ## Analysing
-Natural Language Processing
     - opennlp/nltk / https://github.com/clips/pattern
     
-A search engine just for your dataset can also help
     - lucene/solr
     
-For light weight analysis, try R or Ruby
     - http://www.r-bloggers.com/simple-text-mining-with-r/
     
     - http://blog.josephwilk.net/ruby/latent-semantic-analysis-in-ruby.html similar terms usually found together
@@ -420,7 +412,7 @@
 
 ## Visualisation
 ###  Tree/Hierarchy visualisation
-Sometimes what you actually have is a tree/hierarchy with no interconnections.
+Sometimes what you actually have is a tree/hierarchy with no interconnections. In these cases, it's better to use a Tree visualisation.
  http://www.randelshofer.ch/treeviz/ http://thejit.org/demos/ http://mbostock.github.com/protovis/ex/treemap.html http://blog.pixelingene.com/2011/07/building-a-tree-diagram-in-d3-js/d3 for Trees and Hierarchies
  http://mbostock.github.com/d3/ex/pack.html http://mbostock.github.com/d3/ex/tree.html